kishimoto is great at drawing choreography and has fantastic perspective drawing
while Loda( OP author ) draws fight without any choreography 
i remember when i watched king vs zoro last year in anime it got genuine improved
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i havent watched one piece since episode 670 kek. How is the animation quality these days? It was really bad back in the day, one piece was down bad. On the familiar, it looks really cool already, I was actually trying to mentally thinking about how I would raw it or improve it but I cant think of anything
I don't watch One Piece, only i watch for ''Big'' moments like last year guffy ( jesus reincarnation ) vs laido
king vs zoro or big mom vs kid, law but i must admit that
Pacing is shit, if not worse but at same animation is...mixed bag at same genuine improved, there are SOME great moments ( for OP standards ) like loro vs king finale but then we had this weird ass shit DBZ style aura ( no kidding ) like laido vs guffy on top
what are you thought on state of OP ? used to love both manga show, now i have mixed feelings about this, genuine think that naruto is better as overall than OP
I like third one best, second one is nice too. I can imagine the first one with ears like gazelle horns kek
If you need three wolfs use all three designs imo
i mean idk what to say
i was very hyped when i got into anime, watched the whole thing at the time twice in a row.
Growing up kinda sheltered helped too.
However, looking back its not that great. Number one, its obviously based that asian tale journey to the west or whatever. The main charc is a monkey type character. For some reason asians love recycling that story.
The plot has some really interesting conspiracy elements
- child trafficing and abuse - candy
- one world government
- secret technology and weapons
- forgotten/hidden war against one advanced country (ww2?)
- biological weapons
So I think the potential is really there, but the whole thing should have been like max 100 episodes long LMFAO. Once it became commerically successful and began creating jobs for 1000s of people indirectly, nobody had any incentive to finish the story anymore.
nein it was concept for one summon, familiar i think skeleton one is best too
it has 1124 chapters now
one more critique
the manga is not readable, idk if that is a hot take
but one time i tread reading the manga on my PC at work, and I got nauseous to the point where I felt like throwing up
the panels are stuffed with details, there is no hierarchy of elements, it feels like looking into a blinking flashlight.
Im gonna go out on a limb and say that Oda is actually a mediocre manga artist, at least composition wise
here is an example + a reddit thread where someone shared my experience
View: https://www.reddit.com/r/Piratefolk/comments/zfgh3r/bro_this_double_spread_is_literally_five_pages/
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one more critique
the manga is not readable, idk if that is a hot take
but one time i tread reading the manga on my PC at work, and I got nauseous to the point where I felt like throwing up
the panels are stuffed with details, there is no hierarchy of elements, it feels like looking into a blinking flashlight.
Im gonna go out on a limb and say that Oda is actually a mediocre manga artist, at least composition wise
here is an example + a reddit thread where someone shared my experience
View: https://www.reddit.com/r/Piratefolk/comments/zfgh3r/bro_this_double_spread_is_literally_five_pages/
Unironically Wubo ( Bleach author ) and BnHA author are best Shoune Jump artists and CSM author has fantastic designs ( Gun Devil
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Oda has shit panelling and like you said he has AWFUL sense of space on panels
Toriyama had good panelling
Toriayma was a way better artist, soooo much better. Like his trad artworks are actually good. Odas shit is like 5 points worse on average.
Just compare this:
to this
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Better vid quality also changed minimalny first shoot
Better vid quality also changed minimalny first shoot
Storyboard in making
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Ready or Not fanart
AAAAA
Okay goys taking short break from animation
Must finish storyboard first
Old work Naruto Sasuke in BLEACH style
Must finish storyboard first
Old work Naruto Sasuke in BLEACH style
honestly the naruto there looks unsightly like he's salivating and about to rape a child
Nice, Naruto looks better in Bleach artstyle
Do you like drawing in anime artstyle the most?
In past i had break from art which now regret
Sweet. I really like these two
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will likely continue it
I like the birds flying you added
When is the project due?
to end of march i have time to finish it by then
if you need any advice askIt can be music, drawings, poems anything
I'm bored this summer, all I do is study for the exams I owe in uni so I decided to pick up drawing again after years
Here's what I did, post yours
(First one is supposed to be Thom Yorke in the karma police music video but I fucked up his face after retouching it a bit
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I've also started learning guitar but I'm lazy with practice. I follow some free course online. I'll stop being lazy and practice more
Feedback on how to improve drawing in this thread would be appreciated. Also any place online that is good to study music theory for free..
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fantastic stuff, i like how blackbeard fruit ( darkness logia looks like )
might finish this gun devil...maybe even until this morning
finished this big boy didn't had time for more detailed shadowing
my shadowing reminds me of cologne cathedral kinda ( at least here )
Thank you. I was committed to its realization
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