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Dr. Autismo

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Overload

Real name: Marco Volante
Age: 38
Nationality: Italian
Occupation: Mercenary and assassin
Height: 6'10
Hair: dark brown
Eyes: none, formerly brown, but replaced by
red bionic eyes

Distinctive features: possesses large bionic arms which contain weapons and increase his physical strength.
He uses these arms to take on high-risk contracts, specializing in overwhelming opponents with firepower and tactical disorientation for clients.
He also has a flash bulb on his forehead, which emits a blinding light to his enemies and his bionic eyes allow him to see in all visions.

Background:

Little is known of Marco's early life, but at some point as an adult, he became a serial killer and travelled Italy and Sicily to find victims.
His true kill count is unknown, Marco himself claims he murdered 23, but evidence strongly suggests more victims.
Italian authorities found 8 more victims of Marco's, but it's rumoured that there are more, waiting to be discovered.

After his apprehension by police and during his trail, Marco looked pleasure recounting his actions to the judge and jury, cataloguing his depraved crimes.

Marco was obviously sentenced to life in prison without the possibility of parole, and to spend 25 years of his sentence in solitary confinement.
Marco's trail received large media attention across Europe, as did his sentencing and imprisonment.
Some sources claim his actions disgusted the justice system so much, they were considering returning the death penalty.

Unbeknownst to all but a few, Marco's imprisonment was a smokescreen.
The EU falsified Marco's imprisonment so they could use him for a secret black ops unit at the control of the EU.
This black ops teams members were violent, dangerous cyborgs who acted as assassins to operate in foreign countries and manipulate events within their borders.

Marco was turned into a cyborg, having his arms and eyes replaced with bionics and received grueling training to become a member of this unit.

The alternative was indeed life in prison and a natural born murderer like Marco couldn't stand the possibility of living life without killing.

Marco would earn the codename Overload and operate as an EU black ops cyborg assassin in the middle east and Africa, but he broke free from his handlers and escaped to operate as a freelance mercenary.
 
Isn't he kinda overpowered?
 
Isn't he kinda overpowered?
He's kinda meant to, but he can be outsmarted and overpowered by someone who's more experienced and battle hardened than him
 
Super cool and edgy. Based for making him Italian
 
He's kinda meant to, but he can be outsmarted and overpowered by someone who's more experienced and battle hardened than him
And what about power of friendship?
 
Evil EU zogbot? I hope not
 
But what if he's good deep inside?
The only good thing about overload is that he can and will betray his current employer if a better offer comes up.
 
@Grodd @Pancakecel @TooSomething @Stupid Clown @FuckYou
 
Interesting. Very unique
 
Interesting. Very unique
Thought he'd be more unique if he was Italian.
The only fictional characters that I know of that are Italian are the stupid mario lovers
 
intEResting, Grok says he might look something like this, based off your description:


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That's better, much more menacing
Hes meant to have metallic prongs connected to his ears, which pull at the corners of his mouth, giving him a constant grin
 
Thought he'd be more unique if he was Italian.
The only fictional characters that I know of that are Italian are the stupid mario lovers
There's a lot of gangster characters.
 
Sounds good like a Mix of robocop and Agent 47
 
The only good thing about overload is that he can and will betray his current employer if a better offer comes up.
Good, I like that he has no loyalty to anyone. A wild beast that does what it likes.
 
And what he likes isn't very nice
Yeah, and that is good for a character. Also, ols don't make him some tragic victim of society or something.

Pls don't give him a cheesy story about how he only enjoys killing because he was somehow wronged or is damaged.

Also, what do you think of this cave Vampire from this movie?
It's Charles Dance playing him.


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yBOAP37bldQ


I like how he literally enjoys spilling blood. An almost sexual, orgasmic act to him. Both hungry and horny.
Devouring, slaying, eating everyone is his path.
 
Yeah, and that is good for a character. Also, ols don't make him some tragic victim of society or something.

Pls don't give him a cheesy story about how he only enjoys killing because he was somehow wronged or is damaged.
I won't, villains don't need to be tragic or sympathetic, sometimes they can just be pure evil.
Giving villains tragic and sympathetic origin stories can even ruin them
Also, what do you think of this cave Vampire from this movie?
It's Charles Dance playing him.


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yBOAP37bldQ


I like how he literally enjoys spilling blood. An almost sexual, orgasmic act to him. Both hungry and horny.
Devouring, slaying, eating everyone is his path.

It's ok, but I never cared for movies or vampires tbh.
 
I won't, villains don't need to be tragic or sympathetic, sometimes they can just be pure evil.
Giving villains tragic and sympathetic origin stories can even ruin them

Good, because otherwise foids would be drooling and lusting over him as they do with all Villains.
 



Overload

Real name: Marco Volante
Age: 38
Nationality: Italian
Occupation: Mercenary and assassin
Height: 6'10
Hair: dark brown
Eyes: none, formerly brown, but replaced by
red bionic eyes

Distinctive features: possesses large bionic arms which contain weapons and increase his physical strength.
He uses these arms to take on high-risk contracts, specializing in overwhelming opponents with firepower and tactical disorientation for clients.
He also has a flash bulb on his forehead, which emits a blinding light to his enemies and his bionic eyes allow him to see in all visions.

Background:

Little is known of Marco's early life, but at some point as an adult, he became a serial killer and travelled Italy and Sicily to find victims.
His true kill count is unknown, Marco himself claims he murdered 23, but evidence strongly suggests more victims.
Italian authorities found 8 more victims of Marco's, but it's rumoured that there are more, waiting to be discovered.

After his apprehension by police and during his trail, Marco looked pleasure recounting his actions to the judge and jury, cataloguing his depraved crimes.

Marco was obviously sentenced to life in prison without the possibility of parole, and to spend 25 years of his sentence in solitary confinement.
Marco's trail received large media attention across Europe, as did his sentencing and imprisonment.
Some sources claim his actions disgusted the justice system so much, they were considering returning the death penalty.

Unbeknownst to all but a few, Marco's imprisonment was a smokescreen.
The EU falsified Marco's imprisonment so they could use him for a secret black ops unit at the control of the EU.
This black ops teams members were violent, dangerous cyborgs who acted as assassins to operate in foreign countries and manipulate events within their borders.

Marco was turned into a cyborg, having his arms and eyes replaced with bionics and received grueling training to become a member of this unit.

The alternative was indeed life in prison and a natural born murderer like Marco couldn't stand the possibility of living life without killing.

Marco would earn the codename Overload and operate as an EU black ops cyborg assassin in the middle east and Africa, but he broke free from his handlers and escaped to operate as a freelance mercenary.
making him 6 10 is high iq
hell be simped on by foids so much
 
Good, because otherwise foids would be drooling and lusting over him as they do with all Villains.
True, even in actual stories too.
Like how Harley Quinn is jokers girlfriend and Catwoman and poison ivy want batman to be a villain rather than a hero
hell be simped on by foids so much
Chicks dig a guy with long hair and enormous mechanical arms
 
True, even in actual stories too.
Like how Harley Quinn is jokers girlfriend and Catwoman and poison ivy want batman to be a villain rather than a hero

Chicks dig a guy with long hair and enormous mechanical arms
Have you noticed how Catwoman (damn, literal catwoman) and poison ivy are feminists?
They want absolut control over men and seem to despise them.

I think the reason why they are attracted by Batman is because he appears to be incorruptible and they want to corrupt them to prove that all men are the same.

Weak characters, ngl.

Although I hate Batman and all that shit, the characters and what they are fighting for are still interesting.
 
Have you noticed how Catwoman (damn, literal catwoman) and poison ivy are feminists?
They want absolut control over men and seem to despise them.

I think the reason why they are attracted by Batman is because he appears to be incorruptible and they want to corrupt them to prove that all men are the same.

Weak characters, ngl.
I don't care too much for them both either, but they don't have to be written like that.
They can actually be written as interesting, but they don't because they get written by soy writers and feminist propagandists.
Poison ivy wants to wipe out all humans so plants can inherit the earth and catwoman just wants to steal cat shit,. because she just really likes cats.
Btw, pretty big wasted opportunity to call her black cat, instead of Catwoman tbh.
Catwoman is just a dumb name.
Although I hate Batman and all that shit, the characters and what they are fighting for are still interesting.
I prefer the villains that play into the theme of gothic horror like batman does.
Villains like scarecrow, Solomon Grundy, manbat, mad hatter, Hugo Strange and deacon blackfire.

I hate the joker, don't care for twoface, penguins ok, riddler feels like he should be a flash villain tbh, and Mr freeze is a oneitis simp.
 
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