Adelphi University Sent me a "Cease & Desist" Letter

[Deleted member 40927]

After Explaining Bogus Criminal Charges from Jews....

I sent them the PDF but here is the message below I sent them....

Why Cars By Owner Was Started?

How bogus criminal charges from an abusive employer motivated me to create Cars By Owner, Inc.

carsbyowner.io

fuck this country....

Fuck the USA and fuck modern western countries with their bullshit feminist system.

 

[tacotown2142]

Are you a tranny? The website reads like insane schizo ramblings to the point where I can't even tell what it's trying to say.

 

[Transcended Trucel]

Are you a tranny? The website reads like insane schizo ramblings to the point where I can't even tell what it's trying to say.

true tbh

 

[Deleted member 40927]

Are you a tranny? The website reads like insane schizo ramblings to the point where I can't even tell what it's trying to say.

No not anymore. Thank God.

Also this website does not allow you to be here if you are tranny.

Okay so what should I do to make it more readable?

Advice?

I'm not one of those faggots that gets butt hurt if someone says their writing sucks....

If it sucks, it sucks I guess... what can I do to improve it?

 

[calimero]

Arent you that guy that bragged about having kartel or maffia connections?

 

[nightbane]

No not anymore. Thank God.

Also this website does not allow you to be here if you are tranny.

Okay so what should I do to make it more readable?

Advice?

I'm not one of those faggots that gets butt hurt if someone says their writing sucks....

If it sucks, it sucks I guess... what can I do to improve it?

Make a tldr, no one is reading all that bullshit

 

[tacotown2142]

according to the website you were put on cross-sex hormones at 13 and it caused you bone density issues? Have you tried suing the doctor for medical malpractice?

Okay so what should I do to make it more readable?

Structure it like you're telling someone a story. It comes off as extremely scattered. If you read it aloud to me as is i would think you were on drugs. Try putting it in a text to speech thing and listening to how it sounds.

 

[I.N.C.E.L.S. Boss]

too many words

 

[Deleted member 40927]

ok thanks for the advice.

I will try to make it shorter and more to the point.

 

[TheCatMan]

You were threatened at a Ferrari dealer?

 

[Deleted member 40927]

You were threatened at a Ferrari dealer?

Yes.

I fixed it up and listened to your guys suggestions.

Accepting me on this forum was not a mistake but it was genius to accept on this forum.

I listen and I don't get butthurt.

I made it shorter and more to the point.

Bad Employer.pdf

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Why I Started This Company - Cars By Owner, Inc. Free New & Used Car

I fully explain in this PDF file why I started Cars By Owner, Inc. Click the link below to download the PDF.

carsbyowner.io

That's the link for downloading the PDF....

I think it's a lot more readable and actually makes you want to read it.

Let me know if it's a lot better than before?