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Dr. Autismo

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@PersonalityChad @Pancakecel @TooSomething @Sphinxter, get your arses in here.
You've seen Overload and suggested that I make comics.
And yeah, I want to, I've wanted to literally since I'm was 8 years old.

I recently made up a plot and setting for a comic story, but aside from Overload, and the mc and another character, I've not designed any characters, but made up some concepts and ideas to flesh out the world.

And btw, i'm intentionally leaving out names for characters and certain things, because I don't want to reveal too much.
If I do actually make a comic out of this, it would be a webcomic, and don't want it to be traced back to my IS account.
Being an Inkwell is a massive no no in cyberland.

Anyhoo, here's the plot:

In the far future, many countries fortified sprawling urban population centres and erected large Lazer cannons across their boarders to shoot down nuclear warheads during a potential nuclear war.

A few years later, nuclear war breaks out.
The united kingdom was able to shoot down many incoming nukes, but some got through, resulting in London, Birmingham, Manchester and the entire south west being destroyed.

When the war ended, a fortified city sprawling across northern england, southern Scotland and some parts of Wales regrouped and rebuilt.
The nuclear war did not end the world and wipe out mankind, it only birthed a bloody, brutal new character of human history.
129 years after the war, this city is drowning in violent crime, corrupt police on the payroll of powerful crime lords, and assassins, cyborgs, mercenaries and supervillains.

The MC of this work is a member of a group of mercenaries who specialises in bodyguarding, assassinations and trafficking.
Hes 29YO English goth boy and is an ideal Aryan Ubermensch, being white, 6'5, blonde and having blue eyes.
He wears a white mask to hide his identity and wears a long black coat, black shirt, black trousers and black shoes.
For weapons, he dual wields SMGs and carrys a long sharp dagger.

This AI generated.images are what he looks like

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As for his origin, he was originally a member of a vigilante movement who fought against crime, but quit when he found the movement hypothetical.
He now views the crime in the city essential for.peoples survival because it's the only way many people can make money and survive.

So yeah, the "villains" the our MC fights are often rival mercenaries, assassins, targets they have to kill, etc.

I would describe all this of being a combo of batman, judge dredd, darker than black and black lagoon.

One character our MC fights is this debt collector who don't take money, but lives.
This is him here

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So yeah, rate my comic story
 
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Not bad. Based for embracing the over the top 90s anti-hero edge tbh
 
I like it, does the MC get any companion like a cool robo-pet or something to fight with him?
 
I like it, does the MC get any companion like a cool robo-pet or something to fight with him?
No, I don't think so.

I think he would have small spherical drones with a small built in anti grav engine so he could easily track down targets or spy on people
 


 
That's pretty cool :feelsYall:
 
Oh yeah will he have to fight immigrants?
Yeah, some people he fights an kills are niggers, pakis and jeets.

I got some ideas too, like this one crazy Islamic cult who perform sacrifices of non Muslims to appease Allah.
And this Indian serial killer who kills people and mixes their flesh into the curry he serves at this Indian takeaway he runs.
 
Yeah, some people he fights an kills are niggers, pakis and jeets.

I got some ideas too, like this one crazy Islamic cult who perform sacrifices of non Muslims to appease Allah.
And this Indian serial killer who kills people and mixes their flesh into the curry he serves at this Indian takeaway he runs.
Nice, is (what survived) of the UK split into multiple states or is it mostly united, if it's united is it more loose federative or a strong central state? Also it'd be interesting what they might be, simple warlords or maybe a theocratic monarchy of some sort, I doubt a Republic
 
Nice, is (what survived) of the UK split into multiple states or is it mostly united, if it's united is it more loose federative or a strong central state? Also it'd be interesting what they might be, simple warlords or maybe a theocratic monarchy of some sort, I doubt a Republic
Officially, it's one big united state, but some enclaves and autonomous zones have popped up here and there, run by greedy warlords and extremist movements.
The city itself its not referred as Britain, and certain areas of it are not called England, or Scotland, or Wales.

All of it is just named after the city now.
Kinda like how in judge dredd, mega city one takes up multiple states on the eastern US seaboard, but those states that are covered by mega city one are not referred to by their names.
Mega city one itself is pretty much one big super state, like the ones in 1984.
In the America story (shitty overrated judge dredd story btw) they even say "this isn't America, this is mega city one!".

The city in this storys like that, it's not Britain, it's [city name].
 
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How big is this city exactly?
I don't know about the actual size, but the city sprawls across northern england, southern Scotland and some northern and western parts of wales
Also is Britain still an island or has any of the landscape/water changed?
It's still an island, but most of it is a highly irradiated wasteland.
Some areas and islands surrounding the British archipelago like northern ireland, the isle of man, Isle of white, jersey, Guernsey and some of the Northern Scottish islands have also been converted into large fortified population centres.
 
Some areas and islands surrounding the British archipelago like northern ireland, the isle of man, Isle of white, jersey, Guernsey and some of the Northern Scottish islands have also been converted into large fortified population centres.
Would for example northern Ireland ever send soldiers/mercenaries to loot the big city? And which side would he be on, whichever paid or his homeland?
 
Would for example northern Ireland ever send soldiers/mercenaries to loot the big city? And which side would he be on, whichever paid or his homeland?
Id imagine northern Ireland and the Irish Republic having all sorts of political issues and factions, like the return of the IRA who want to conquer Northern Ireland and loyalist paramilitaries who fight them.
One faction is the Irish empire, who want to unite all of Ireland and expand outward and capture oversees territory
 
Reminds me of fallout :feelsokman:
 
Reminds me of fallout :feelsokman:
Kinda is, the wasteland is like fallout, but the actual city it takes place in is like batman beyond and judge dredd
 
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Kinda is, the wasteland is like fall, but the actual city it takes place in is like batman beyond and judge dredd
I see :feelsokman:

So like a cyber punk style futuristic vibe
 
The debt collector is nice.

The knife / Bajonette on the SMG is more of a hindrance than helpful, tbh. It makes the weapon too long to be properly used in CQC. It also creates an imbalance for the Merc.

I suspect that the coat will also reduce the mobility of our anti-hero as well as the debt collector.

And yes, fighting crime nowadays is like fighting Robin Hood.

Would gladly steal from the rich and give to the poor, tbh.
 
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I see :feelsokman:

So like a cyber punk style futuristic vibe
Kinda, but nothing like that shitty game or shitty anime.

The only reason people like the cyberpunk anime is because of that loli food who's in it
The debt collector is nice.

And yes, fighting crime nowadays is like fighting Robin Hood.

Would gladly steal from the rich and give to the poor, tbh.
I'd rather steal from the rich and give to myself tbh
 
Kinda, but nothing like that shitty game or shitty anime.

The only reason people like the cyberpunk anime is because of that loli food who's in it

I'd rather steal from the rich and give to myself tbh
Makes sense, since you were literally homeless
 
there's potential thematic depth in the main characters philosophy, maybe the plot engine could explore that
 
 
@PersonalityChad @Pancakecel @TooSomething @Sphinxter, get your arses in here.
You've seen Overload and suggested that I make comics.
And yeah, I want to, I've wanted to literally since I'm was 8 years old.

I recently made up a plot and setting for a comic story, but aside from Overload, and the mc and another character, I've not designed any characters, but made up some concepts and ideas to flesh out the world.

And btw, i'm intentionally leaving out names for characters and certain things, because I don't want to reveal too much.
If I do actually make a comic out of this, it would be a webcomic, and don't want it to be traced back to my IS account.
Being an Inkwell is a massive no no in cyberland.

Anyhoo, here's the plot:

In the far future, many countries fortified sprawling urban population centres and erected large Lazer cannons across their boarders to shoot down nuclear warheads during a potential nuclear war.

A few years later, nuclear war breaks out.
The united kingdom was able to shoot down many incoming nukes, but some got through, resulting in London, Birmingham, Manchester and the entire south west being destroyed.

When the war ended, a fortified city sprawling across northern england, southern Scotland and some parts of Wales regrouped and rebuilt.
The nuclear war did not end the world and wipe out mankind, it only birthed a bloody, brutal new character of human history.
129 years after the war, this city is drowning in violent crime, corrupt police on the payroll of powerful crime lords, and assassins, cyborgs, mercenaries and supervillains.

The MC of this work is a member of a group of mercenaries who specialises in bodyguarding, assassinations and trafficking.
Hes 29YO English goth boy and is an ideal Aryan Ubermensch, being white, 6'5, blonde and having blue eyes.
He wears a white mask to hide his identity and wears a long black coat, black shirt, black trousers and black shoes.
For weapons, he dual wields SMGs and carrys a long sharp dagger.

This AI generated.images are what he looks like

View attachment 1595625View attachment 1595624View attachment 1595622
View attachment 1595628

As for his origin, he was originally a member of a vigilante movement who fought against crime, but quit when he found the movement hypothetical.
He now views the crime in the city essential for.peoples survival because it's the only way many people can make money and survive.

So yeah, the "villains" the our MC fights are often rival mercenaries, assassins, targets they have to kill, etc.

I would describe all this of being a combo of batman, judge dredd, darker than black and black lagoon.

One character our MC fights is this debt collector who don't take money, but lives.
This is him here

View attachment 1595627View attachment 1595621

So yeah, rate my comic story
Rampage ahh plot
 

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