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This Thread was made in honour of @Vermilioncore's cozy poems .
May he be released from his cage soon .

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i think ive finally lost it , the final nail hit the coffin
now im completely broken ,
silently laying , rotting inside my cave , feeling nothin' ,
hiding like im a shut in
fighting fate seems so hopeless
might as well just say fuck it
and finally kick the bucket , its
so easy to leave by ropeing ,
no reason to keep on copeing .

No Reason to delude myself ,
should i keep on suffering or just shoot myself ?
take the easy way out , instead of slowly losing faith
or watch this world burn, while i just do my thing ?

should i try to spread the blackpill on that numale page ?
go on reddit.. and shitpost on trufemcels ?
day by day , annihilating their bluepilled brains
til they feel same way that i do everyday ?

should i shitpost in offtopic , not even use my brain ?
cope by spamming high iq and " brutal mate " ?
or produce high effort Threads like a sewer , late-
ly it all feels the same to me ... doomer trait .

should i try .... to accumulate
wealth , statutsmaxx and pursue .. greatness
try to choose my fate
instead of rotting in this prison , in this suifuel place ?

should i take revenge in a gruesome way ?
Kill innocent people , indulge in truecel rage ?
i wont do it , im not a ruthless , brain-
dead , deluded maniac , full of hatred .

should i indulge in a self improvement phase ?
take the redpill and listen to boomer bait ?
live in a fantasyworld ... and fool myself ?
in the end im still stuck in this Loop , im caged !

Thers no way .. off this moving train ,
instead of jumping on the tracks and be mutilated ,
theres no future , face it , its a futile race
theres no room to break free from this cruel fate .

fuck it , ill just make my own rules and change
the way my brain works , like isoflurane
hold my middlefinger up , their abuse wont phase me
fight this fucked up system , that refuses to help me .

I will battle for the sun , this monsoon wont break me ,
even if the whole world .. chooses to hate me ,
let them cope , let them blame me
but they'll never win , they'll never change me .




and so on so forth blablabla
peepee poopoo



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English isnt my first language , so please dont judge .
im just trying to pactice tbh
 
Please judge this poem .
Is it cringe or are there some good parts to it ?
 
I, for the life of me, can't even write a one line poem.
 
whoch ones?

No Reason to delude myself ,
should i keep on suffering or just shoot myself ?
take the easy way out , instead of slowly losing faith
or watch this world burn, while i just do my thing ?

should i take revenge in a gruesome way ?
Kill innocent people , indulge in truecel rage ?
i wont do it , im not a ruthless , brain-
dead , deluded maniac , full of hatred .

should i indulge in a self improvement phase ?
take the redpill and listen to boomer bait ?
live in a fantasyworld ... and fool myself ?
in the end im still stuck in this Loop , im caged !


 
No Reason to delude myself ,
should i keep on suffering or just shoot myself ?
take the easy way out , instead of slowly losing faith
or watch this world burn, while i just do my thing ?

should i take revenge in a gruesome way ?
Kill innocent people , indulge in truecel rage ?
i wont do it , im not a ruthless , brain-
dead , deluded maniac , full of hatred .

should i indulge in a self improvement phase ?
take the redpill and listen to boomer bait ?
live in a fantasyworld ... and fool myself ?
in the end im still stuck in this Loop , im caged !
thanks for the feedback bro
 
I miss that nigga ngl
 
and so on so forth blablabla
peepee poopoo
This part was the best one kek.

Jk is good. I can relate to the content, going through the different possibilities we have as incels, I do it often. I'm not good at judging the metrics or rhymes or anything though. I'm not even sure how to pace the reading of it.
 
I'm not good at judging the metrics or rhymes or anything though. I'm not even sure how to pace the reading of it.
i envisioned a beat while writing it , in my mind it flowed perfectly
 

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