Media I'm writing an Incels.co commercial and I need this line workshopped.

[FrothySolutions]

Imagine hearing a man, about 46, saying this line to the camera:

"When you come into my Incels.co, you're gonna see friendly people"

The line is meant to be said hitting the "people."

 

[Deleted member 4159]

"When you come into my Incels.co, you're gonna see friendly people"

The line is meant to be said hitting the "people."

What do you mean?

 

[FrothySolutions]

What do you mean?

I mean you say it "Friendly PEOPLE"

 

[Deleted member 21504]

Huh? Are you ok man?

 

[Deleted member 18193]

Why the emphasis on people? Does it have to do with our sub-humanity or something else?

 

[FrothySolutions]

Why the emphasis on people? Does it have to do with our sub-humanity or something else?

It sounds better when I say it.

 

[Guest2]

What is "workshopped"?

 

[FrothySolutions]

What is "workshopped"?

Mulled over by a focus group/people here. Evaluated by you.

 

[blond_elf_bard]

you want one of us to send you a recording?

 

[grondilu]

I don't get it.

 

[zangano1]

Change people to creatures

 

[Deleted member 301]

you want one of us to send you a recording?

Good idea.

 

[BrettyBoy]

Good luck with whatever the thing is that you’re doing, man.

 

[needsolution]

Good luck bro

 

[FrothySolutions]

you want one of us to send you a recording?

I don't get it.

I need the line rated/critiqued.

Change people to creatures

Okay, good note, good note.

 

[TheMinimalist]

I don't think most people would get the commercial

 

[BrettyBoy]

Avatar posting Halloween 2019. Ballsy.

Yeah, man.

 

[BrettyBoy]

Fucking glad you're free, man

Thanks, man.

 

[BrettyBoy]

What are we doing

I don’t even know, man.

 

[lightskin2thousand0]

Why the emphasis on people? Does it have to do with our sub-humanity or something else?

because NPCs aren’t people and most of us arent

 

[Deleted member 16624]

Just post an audio recording of you saying the oneliner -theory