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Experiment Idea for a book I plan to write (is it good)

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So the book takes place in a small but active town (don't know the name of the town) and everyone knows each other and there's apple pie and all that shit with white picket fences and rich kids, you get the gist of it. The story is about a life long victim delinquent teenage boy with good grades and whatnot and is only seen as a delinquent because he tries to fit in with the wrong crowd for the beginning of the story. (Give me some name ideas for this kid) his mom is an Irish foid and his father a descendant of a German bloodline. He has fair somewhat long black shaggy hair and is of average build for his age, not muscular, not fat, just normal. He's never had many friends and was and is constantly bullied and his father and mother press him about his grades. He is honestly just stressed about everything, and with no friends people rejecting him with the only people he can talk to are delinquents who beat him up for fun his life is pure and utter suffering.



Anyways our main event that starts shit off is that one day he wakes up and goes to school as usual but misses the bus again even though it was almost daylight, signifying further really how no one gives a shit about this kid and how he is mostly invisible to the human eye. He ask his mom whom is getting ready for work to drive him to school but she shames him and calls him incompetent and slow and tells him how much a burden he is and perhaps slaps the ever living shit out of him and tells him to walk to school. So he does! He is expectantly late for school (maybe perhaps some thugs did something to him or said something to him? sounds kinda dumb so im probably not going to have anyone say anything to him and just ignore him and giving him disgusted looks and or perhaps while he walks to school someone looks at him with a look of pure disgust and hatred?) Anyways he starts to think about his past and starts crying and walking slower with people looking at him and whispering things about him. He goes to school but he has somehow missed 2nd period and goes to grab his tardy slip from the office but the principle wants to talk to him because he has a record of being late and is failing pretty much all of his classes. He scolds him as well calling him hopeless and how hes waiting to expel him finally and doesn't so much as acknowledge his explanations. He is excused and walks out of the office to his class and his teacher scolds him as well. He basically has a mental breakdown as he has had enough and he beats the living shit out of the teacher almost killing him and is in the process of going through court. However the principle who would have expeled him suddenly is murdered by ((something)) brutally and the assistant princible considers giving him a second chance but he will have to go through extreme counseling. Of course his parents are mad at him, however he doesn't give a flying fuck, and he notices this. He marvels at his new change in character and finally yells back at his parents as any good little teen would. His father tries to strike him but he counters the strike and sprains his wrist. His mother can only watch in horror but she doesn't want to call the police on him because she doesn't want to lose her job for suspicions of child abuse which will damage her reputation. He then goes to his bed, gives us a chuckle, and sleeps.




This marks a new chapter for the boy which I don't know how it will unfold. All I know is that the boy gets supernatural powers which came from his suffering along with that ((something)) that killed the principle which is a being born from his suffering and a manifestation of his will which can talk to him telepathically and shit and guides him to use his powers correctly.



Tell me should I have his mom beat him up and thugs do something to him?
 
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Books are physical TLDRs why should I bother?
Also nice signature. (I still hate anime but I know her from a porno video)
 
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tip 1 don't use anime as inspiration for your storylines
it was kind of inspired from anime but they wont be yelling special moves or anything kek and he wont go through some training arc
 
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You’re black.
 
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the gif in my signature?
yes, i saw her on a scat video that I saw somewhere and my alzheimer brain forgot to download it or remember where I saw that, sorry :cryfeels:
 
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yes, i saw her on a scat video that I saw somewhere and my alzheimer brain forgot to download it or remember where I saw that, sorry :cryfeels:
of course it was a scat video




ngl my consuption of real girls farting has been..... getting lower and lower because the new models are boring and the old ones are just fucking old and boring
I've been consuming more and more fart porn made by animation software as its elements are pure absurdity. You would rarely ever see another chick fart in another chicks mouth :feelsohh:
 
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ngl my consuption of real girls farting has been..... getting lower and lower because the new models are boring and the old ones are just fucking old and boring
lmao you have read my mind, based 2d foids are more fun to hang out with.
 
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lmao you have read my mind, based 2d foids are more fun to hang out with.
Not 2d like 3d. I cant find good 2d vids

any artist whom make good 2d vids?
 
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This sounds kinda like a mix between falling down and joker :feelsjuice: But it does have some potential :feelsokman: I think if you make him more of an asshole type it’ll be a little more interesting
 
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This sounds kinda like a mix between falling down and joker :feelsjuice: But it does have some potential :feelsokman: I think if you make him more of an asshole type it’ll be a little more interesting
oh no he becomes a huge ass hat and that assistant principle who helps him also has that ((something)) and supernatural powers which came from his personal suffering is also an ass hat as well



We need a villain though or someone who they have to face
 
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any artist whom make good 2d vids?
Don't know artists of scat, but I have surely downloaded a super hot animation on thisvid(which is a garbage site, I have to recognize)

 
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I only like farts lmao not scat with farts :dafuckfeels:
Oh fug, I have remembered they pooped, my bad, I have a really bad memory, so, sorry brocel
 

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