Mortis
The Senator of Suffering & Minister of Misery
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Thanks for the feedbackNope, I'm not talking about rhetoric. The stuttering aside, your talking points weren't structured, it looked more like you were trying to pile up random ideas.
Even if you had zero speech skills and used a robotic AI voice, simply adding a structure would have helped a lot.