Discussion Can anyone proofread this for me?

[ReconElement]

My purpose of death is simple, I, by no means see myself in a desirably decent position in the future, though I am not a classic case of a depressed individual, I am well aware of my condition. For the short time I have existed, I have been treated as an outcast, my thoughts were neglected, my opinions were not cared for and I was never a part of the "greater community" or the "greater picture". And thus to save myself from what it seemed to me as the eternal isolation and the subsequent mental, financial and physical deterioration, I hereby take the decision of taking my own life as the final solution to this ordeal.

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Don't worry I'm a pussy, it's just in case I ever need it

 

[epillepsy]

My purpose of death is simple: I, by no means, see myself in a desirably decent position in the future. Though I am not a classic case of a depressed individual, I am well aware of my condition. For the short time I have existed, I have been treated as an outcast, my thoughts were neglected, my opinions were not cared for, and I was never a part of the "greater community" or the "greater picture." And thus, to save myself from what seems to me eternal isolation and the subsequent mental, financial, and physical deterioration, I hereby take the decision of taking my own life as the final solution to this ordeal.

 

[Babica Yaga]

My purpose of death is simple: I, by no means, see myself in a desirably decent position in the future. Though I am not a classic case of a depressed individual, I am well aware of my condition. For the short time I have existed, I have been treated as an outcast, my thoughts were neglected, my opinions were not cared for, and I was never a part of the "greater community" or the "greater picture." And thus, to save myself from what seemed to me as the eternal isolation and the subsequent mental, financial and physical deterioration, I hereby take the decision of taking my own life as the final solution to this ordeal.

 

[epillepsy]

i corrected it a bit.

 

[Ecstasy]

my thoughts were neglected

Maybe you should say "my ideas" because thoughts sounds like you did neglect them yourself and you may intended to say others ignored what you brought up and what was on your mind

 

[Deleted member 33827]

I'm going ER on myself.

 

[ReconElement]

Maybe you should say "my ideas" because thoughts sounds like you did neglect them yourself and you may intended to say others ignored what you brought up and what was on your mind

Thank You, your advice is duly noted.

 

[Deleted member 29529]

I'm going ER on myself.

 

[ReconElement]

I'm going ER on myself.

You're planning to use a gun, it's going to leave a mess plus you never know, it might fail

 

[Deleted member 33827]

You're planning to use a gun, it's going to leave a mess plus you never know, it might fail

Yeah I agree. What's the best method anyways? I've read that partial hanging is quite popular among SS circles.

 

[ReconElement]

Yeah I agree. What's the best method anyways? I've read that partial hanging is quite popular among SS circles.

I'm planning a long drop but I don't have any rapidly collapsing platform, so might as well go with the gruesome one, just in case if ever the push comes to shove.

 

[Deleted member 33827]

I'm planning a long drop but I don't have any rapidly collapsing platform, so might as well go with the gruesome one, just in case if ever the push comes to shove.

There's a big skyscraper near my house still under construction, it's like 50 floors I reckon. Ideal for a long drop ngl. I'd never do it, I physically can't. My body won't let me tbh. Best of luck to you tho, you need it fellow curry cel.

 

[ReconElement]

There's a big skyscraper near my house still under construction, it's like 50 floors I reckon. Ideal for a long drop ngl. I'd never do it, I physically can't. My body won't let me tbh. Best of luck to you tho, you need it fellow curry cel.

I was talking about the long drop type of roping, not about jumping off from height.

 

[Deleted member 33827]

I was talking about the long drop type of roping, not about jumping off a height.

I see...damn that's pretty gruesome and lots of things can go wrong. I'd use shotgun implants than this tbf