add trash in the end - subhuman sack of shit because just subhuman sounds worse.
add trash in the end - subhuman sack of shit because just subhuman sounds worse.
What type of genre would these lyrics be for? Its kinda bad because theirs no flow to it, unless i just cant visualize lyrics well
Or sing the lyrics to yourself, how it rises and falls
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The lyrics are too obvious. Make them more abstract and less about being an incel. You can still write the lyrics around loneliness and being an incel, but don’t make it this obvious. For example, here is the lyrics to Ceremony by New Order.
This is why events unnerve me
They find it all, a different story
Notice whom for wheels are turning
Turn again and turn towards this time
All she ask's the strength to hold me
Then again the same old story
World will travel, oh so quickly
Travel first and lean towards this time
Oh, I'll break them down, no mercy shown
Heaven knows, it's got to be this time
Watching her, these things she said
The times she cried, too frail to wake this time
I'll break them down, no mercy shown
Heaven knows, it's got to be this time
Avenues all lined with trees
Picture me and then you start watching
Watching forever
Forever
Watching love grow
Forever
Letting me know
Forever
Notice how lyrics in this song such as “This is why events unnerve me” can be interpreted as social anxiety. Also, the lyrics “Watching love grow, forever” is about feeling disconnected and despondent from everyone. Abstraction in your lyrics will make the song more pleasing to normies, and for yourself.
This is why events unnerve me
They find it all, a different story
Notice whom for wheels are turning
Turn again and turn towards this time
All she ask's the strength to hold me
Then again the same old story
World will travel, oh so quickly
Travel first and lean towards this time
Oh, I'll break them down, no mercy shown
Heaven knows, it's got to be this time
Watching her, these things she said
The times she cried, too frail to wake this time
I'll break them down, no mercy shown
Heaven knows, it's got to be this time
Avenues all lined with trees
Picture me and then you start watching
Watching forever
Forever
Watching love grow
Forever
Letting me know
Forever
Notice how lyrics in this song such as “This is why events unnerve me” can be interpreted as social anxiety. Also, the lyrics “Watching love grow, forever” is about feeling disconnected and despondent from everyone. Abstraction in your lyrics will make the song more pleasing to normies, and for yourself.
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the AI makes the worst lyrics sound good tbh
linkin park like or three days of grace like
Thats gonna make it come off even more as corny
Set the tone and perspective, like you're playing a character. Are the lyrics confessional or are they a cry directed at something that pisses you off
Ok i can kinda see how it’d work, but i agree that the lyrics need to be a little bit more subtle.
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