Rate my poem about Elliot Rodger!

[ColdBoy]

In the dark, discarded he lays
Beneath the gaze that turns so far away
In stature small, figuratively and true
They look down on him, a dismissive view

Fleeting sadness, anger awaits
The void of desire remains unsate
Torn asunder a husk remains
A final wrath, his souls disdain

Isla Vista where crowds lie
One last incels final cry
Engines scream, bullets fly
The fallen soldier sees no rise.


July 24, 1991-May 23, 2014

RIP
Elliot Rodger

 

[AutistSupremacist]

Very nice, 8/10

 

[FuckYou]

He was such an hero

 

[ColdBoy]

He was such an hero

fr his bravery was unmatched

 

[clocked]

He was such an hero

 

[PureImagination]

Dickrider trait honestly

 

[ColdBoy]

Dickrider trait honestly

Im not dickriding I just genuinely think elliot rodger is a legend

 

[Chang.Beijing]

I don’t like elliot rodger but good poetry 9/10

 

[BlueCore]

 

[SolomanEgg]

it shouldn't rhyme

 

[pedrolopezwasright]

ChatGPT goes hard with this one

 

[Vakasneb3856]

Very Supreme.

 

[go2sleep]

Very nice, 8/10

 

[go2sleep]

ChatGPT recommends "Final Cry" as the name for the poem.

 

[the kurdish loner]

In the dark, discarded he lays
Beneath the gaze that turns so far away
In stature small, figuratively and true
They look down on him, a dismissive view

Fleeting sadness, anger awaits
The void of desire remains unsate
Torn asunder a husk remains
A final wrath, his souls disdain

Isla Vista where crowds lie
One last incels final cry
Engines scream, bullets fly
The fallen soldier sees no rise.


July 24, 1991-May 23, 2014

RIP
Elliot Rodger

Even GPT rates it 8/10

 

[SocialzERo]

He was such an hero

 

[Carter…]

In the dark, discarded he lays
Beneath the gaze that turns so far away
In stature small, figuratively and true
They look down on him, a dismissive view

Fleeting sadness, anger awaits
The void of desire remains unsate
Torn asunder a husk remains
A final wrath, his souls disdain

Isla Vista where crowds lie
One last incels final cry
Engines scream, bullets fly
The fallen soldier sees no rise.


July 24, 1991-May 23, 2014

RIP
Elliot Rodger

I enjoyed this very much! Please someone pin this!