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Rate my poem about Elliot Rodger!

ColdBoy

ColdBoy

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In the dark, discarded he lays
Beneath the gaze that turns so far away
In stature small, figuratively and true
They look down on him, a dismissive view

Fleeting sadness, anger awaits
The void of desire remains unsate
Torn asunder a husk remains
A final wrath, his souls disdain

Isla Vista where crowds lie
One last incels final cry
Engines scream, bullets fly
The fallen soldier sees no rise.


July 24, 1991-May 23, 2014

RIP
Elliot Rodger
 
Very nice, 8/10
 
He was such an hero
 
Dickrider trait honestly
 
I don’t like elliot rodger but good poetry 9/10
 

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