My new poem

[Nothingness]

Something was lost.

My dreams were broken,
My dreams were betrayed,
I left my desolate home
In winter
And no one knew who i was.

Im the silence,
Im the trancendental lightning,
Im the awakened child in the house of dead,
Where puppets play at night in hide and seek.

 

[2340922]

Im awakened child in the house of dead,
Where puppets play at night in hide and seek.

this is nice. Btw how do you write poems? I really cant

 

[Nothingness]

this is nice. Btw how do you write poems? I really cant

It depends.
This one doesnt require too much technique of versification ; - all you have to do is to write down on paper your feelings using associative images. It is not hard work at all.
But rhymed poems require more mental resourses - you have to write what you intended keeping verbal structure flexible in order to reselect words in order to abide rhyme

 

[stuttercel]

Something was lost.

My dreams were broken,
My dreams were betrayed,
I left my desolate home
In winter
And no one knew who i was.

Im the silence,
Im the trancendental lightning,
Im the awakened child in the house of dead,
Where puppets play at night in hide and seek.

i could literally feel the cold lonely winter night

excellent

 

[Nothingness]

i could literally feel the cold lonely winter night

excellent

If you like such vibes i would like to advice you to read Georg Trakle.
He was a real creator of subtle oneric realms unlike me who is just an pretentious amatour tbh.

 

[LastGerman]

I also have a new poem:

It is over.

 

[Blacktarpill]

Thats a nice one but i really like some good ryhmes in poems.

 

[Nothingness]

I also have a new poem:

It is over.

This is my faforite .

Thats a nice one but i really like some good ryhmes in poems.

Me too.

Thats a nice one but i really like some good ryhmes in poems.

Is it good?

The Rage of Cain

I came into this world for its demise,
Rage of doomsday in my eyes.
No mercy from my clan of violence,
Death to fucking homo sapience.

We are generation of sorrow and pain.
We are the nemesis, descendants of Cain.
We came to judge your numerous crimes
Wich hardly possible verse into rhymes;

Too many to count, too grave to forgive.
It is time for a venngence, it is time for a grieve

 

[LastGerman]

This is my faforite .

Thanks, my Fuhrer.

 

[Blacktarpill]

This is my faforite .

Me too.

Is it good?

The Rage of Cain

I came into this world for its demise,
Rage of doomsday in my eyes.
No mercy from my clan of violence,
Death to fucking homo sapience.

We are generation of sorrow and pain.
We are the nemesis, descendants of Cain.
We came to judge your numerous crimes
Wich hardly possible verse into rhymes;

Too many to count, too grave to forgive.
It is time for a venngence, it is time for a grieve

Yeah, thats a nice example tbh.

 

[Mad Baron]

All of them rhyme and are actually emotion provoking.

 

[2340922]

But rhymed poems require more mental resourses - you have to write what you intended keeping verbal structure flexible in order to reselect words in order to abide rhyme

ye i mean those those are hard