Incel manga ideas

[prajeet88]

Thinking of writing an incel manga. How does this idea sound:

Manlet incel (can make him ethnic for SJW points) gets treated like shit his whole life. The first few chapters can be about this - turned down for love, job promotion, gets spat at by foids. Then one day, he has a head on collision with a chad. The chad dies on impact, and the doctors perform an experimental brain transplant to put his brain into the body of the 6ft3 blonde chad. Then rest of the novel can be a revenge arc. First he becomes a CEO billionaire (easy for him as he's used to playing life on hard mode and suddenly he's on easy mode). Then the ex-incel befriends normies and foids who were mean to him only to take revenge on them later (in the most brutal fashion). Some of the revenge arcs can include foids committing suicide after he ghosts them in brutal fasion or cheats on them with hotter foids. Will this sell?

 

[CRASH THE CUCK]

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[CRASH THE CUCK]

Will this sell?

no it wont

 

[EsIstVorbei]

Sounds like a interesting idea but a bit more realism would be better

 

[Robb97]

Maybe it will be a good idea to make him bluepilled up to the accident. Maybe a few times he will almost come to a blackpilled conclusion, but then some event distracts him and he continues being bluepilled, believing that every person is good and all the bluepilled lies that society is telling him.
When he wakes up from the surgery he will realize that all the nurses are smiling at him and treat him with great respect. He will notice those little differences everywhere. How people move out of the way, how he can say the same things as before but now people pay attention to it. All those millions of little things that chad will experience as the most normal things in the world.
At some point shortly after the surgery, there will be an event where he finally swallows the blackpill and begins to see clearly. If this is well done it could even be a go-to resource that we could point people to when they ask what the blackpill is about.
After these events, the character then develops a deep hatred for how the world works and goes on to do the things you're mentioning in your post.

 

[prajeet88]

Sounds like a interesting idea but a bit more realism would be better

What's not realistic? The brain transplant part?

 

[prajeet88]

Maybe it will be a good idea to make him bluepilled up to the accident. Maybe a few times he will almost come to a blackpilled conclusion, but then some event distracts him and he continues being bluepilled, believing that every person is good and all the bluepilled lies that society is telling him.
When he wakes up from the surgery he will realize that all the nurses are smiling at him and treat him with great respect. He will notice those little differences everywhere. How people move out of the way, how he can say the same things as before but now people pay attention to it. All those millions of little things that chad will experience as the most normal things in the world.
At some point shortly after the surgery, there will be an event where he finally swallows the blackpill and begins to see clearly. If this is well done it could even be a go-to resource that we could point people to when they ask what the blackpill is about.
After these events, the character then develops a deep hatred for how the world works and goes on to do the things you're mentioning in your post.

I like this. So he doesn't take revenge immediately, he goes through a blackpill phase first.

 

[Lv99_BixNood]

Isn't this basically the plot of lookism?

 

[Ramcel]

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m94l0L2kQkM