I'd like to know if my chorus and general flow has improved.
Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
You are what people think of you, that's why I'm full of fury
I am going to smash your skull, you infuriating bitch
Peer pressure exceeded ninety thousand kilos per square metre
Peak blinding heat of rage, why don’t you take a peek
The only thing visible is my 12 gauge, confiscated in a cage
My mind is infected with a virus, call it a brain phage
As I turn this page of my life, don’t play fair
Or you will burn your hair right there
I lost the will to live on that hill right there
My only remaining thrill is to kill
My cruel oblivious peers right here
If he or she hears me, I will jeer
This is only a hyperbolised fantasy, you see
I’m not dumb enough to steer in this direction
The consequences outweigh the rewards
Therefore, I don’t need your correction
[Chorus] x2
Heed my words, I will lead the lords
Of this world against the hordes
Of those who cause nothing but pure disorder
[Verse 2]
Objection, your honour, they had a dishonourable perception
My self-awareness is an unbreakable cycle of selfishness
What the fuck do you expect, that I show selflessness?
There are no exceptions for myself; I left my weakness on the shelf
I am locked up now, but at least I never sucked up
To people who knew how to humiliate a man for clout
They allow each other to get fucked up like a drought
Oh wow, your voice is so high pitched when you yell: “Ow!”
This arrangement of information is dedicated to those who seek vengeance
Listen up, gents; I need nothing short of total annihilation
Being different is a problem that transcends every nation
The general population should be ashamed that we can only think of obliteration
I can only live in the shade because you put me in a box
Of electric shocks and barbed socks
My only entertainment is smoking rocks and taking shots
Why are you shaking, you vile fucks?
[Chorus] x2
[Final verse]
I couldn’t live up to your gold standard
You didn’t give anything to me, so I became a hazard
Farewell, my fake friend, see you in Hell
I may be horrendous, but we both fell down the well
Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
You are what people think of you, that's why I'm full of fury
I am going to smash your skull, you infuriating bitch
Peer pressure exceeded ninety thousand kilos per square metre
Peak blinding heat of rage, why don’t you take a peek
The only thing visible is my 12 gauge, confiscated in a cage
My mind is infected with a virus, call it a brain phage
As I turn this page of my life, don’t play fair
Or you will burn your hair right there
I lost the will to live on that hill right there
My only remaining thrill is to kill
My cruel oblivious peers right here
If he or she hears me, I will jeer
This is only a hyperbolised fantasy, you see
I’m not dumb enough to steer in this direction
The consequences outweigh the rewards
Therefore, I don’t need your correction
[Chorus] x2
Heed my words, I will lead the lords
Of this world against the hordes
Of those who cause nothing but pure disorder
[Verse 2]
Objection, your honour, they had a dishonourable perception
My self-awareness is an unbreakable cycle of selfishness
What the fuck do you expect, that I show selflessness?
There are no exceptions for myself; I left my weakness on the shelf
I am locked up now, but at least I never sucked up
To people who knew how to humiliate a man for clout
They allow each other to get fucked up like a drought
Oh wow, your voice is so high pitched when you yell: “Ow!”
This arrangement of information is dedicated to those who seek vengeance
Listen up, gents; I need nothing short of total annihilation
Being different is a problem that transcends every nation
The general population should be ashamed that we can only think of obliteration
I can only live in the shade because you put me in a box
Of electric shocks and barbed socks
My only entertainment is smoking rocks and taking shots
Why are you shaking, you vile fucks?
[Chorus] x2
[Final verse]
I couldn’t live up to your gold standard
You didn’t give anything to me, so I became a hazard
Farewell, my fake friend, see you in Hell
I may be horrendous, but we both fell down the well
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