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I have created my first blackpill comic. Feedback appreciated

copebuster

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Yeah I know it's shit, but it's literally my first time doing anything of the sort. Which is why feedback is appreciated

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The concept is good, but the art needs work. With better art it's a 8/10
 
What a twist. The same rostie who rejected him left him that comment on reddit with a chad cum stain on her face.
 
this is a good aspect to tackle lol

good try for your first time
 
Work on your drawing.
 
What a twist. The same rostie who rejected him left him that comment on reddit with a chad cum stain on her face.
haha thought people wouldn't notice the cumstain. i wanted to draw a full chad fucking her but before i put the effort wanted to see if people would like it
 
Give it a title, brush up on the technique, and it’s solid.
 
haha thought people wouldn't notice the cumstain. i wanted to draw a full chad fucking her but before i put the effort wanted to see if people would like it
Lol, yeah I saw it. That comic was good, hopefully you make more.
 
Yeah I know it's shit, but it's literally my first time doing anything of the sort. Which is why feedback is appreciated

Wr48oPr.jpg

The concept is good but I don't think I could draw this badly even if I tried lol (I have shaky hands, makes my penmanship terrible), you are obviously doing it with a mouse and not your hand else it would likely be better, I think the guy who did the last comics likely used his hands (like drew on a tablet), or he's just really good and "mouse drawing", you don't get much control when drawing that way though.

Maybe trying looking up some videos on drawing 2d characters and settings, would help a lot with form, anatomy, perspective, angles, etc.
 
The concept is good but I don't think I could draw this badly even if I tried lol (I have shaky hands, makes my penmanship terrible), you are obviously doing it with a mouse and not your hand else it would likely be better, I think the guy who did the last comics likely used his hands (like drew on a tablet), or he's just really good and "mouse drawing", you don't get much control when drawing that way though.

Maybe trying looking up some videos on drawing 2d characters and settings, would help a lot with form, anatomy, perspective, angles, etc.
I actually did draw with my hands lol, i'm just that terrible. I never had art class i don't know this shit
 
I actually did draw with my hands lol, i'm just that terrible. I never had art class i don't know this shit
your on the internet all of the worlds knowledge is at your disposal. its embarrassing for a grown man to do something hes bad at.
 
I actually did draw with my hands lol, i'm just that terrible. I never had art class i don't know this shit

Lol damn, how did you even get the leg to be like that in the lower left panel, try being more patient with your lines. Practice makes perfect, especially with art.
 

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