
DarkStar
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DarkStar in the Great War: Major General
U.S. Army Headquarters, Near Richmond, Virginia, United States of America, Summer 1915The command tent smelled of canvas, tobacco, and ink. Major General Daniel “DarkStar” Stark stood over a map table, his blue uniform crisp despite the Virginia heat, his dark eyes tracing the jagged lines of Confederate trenches south of Richmond. At thirty-five, Stark was an anomaly—a South Boston clerk’s son risen to high rank through a mix of ruthless ambition and a knack for machinery. His nickname, “DarkStar,” whispered among the ranks, came from his grim demeanor and the bleak, poetic dispatches he sent to his staff, penned late at night in his tent. The U.S. Army was pushing to break the Confederate lines, and General George Armstrong Custer, the white-haired lion of the Army of the Potomac, had pinned his hopes on barrels—clumsy, ironclad machines that Stark had helped refine.
Stark wasn’t like the other officers. Most, like Custer’s aide, Colonel Abner Dowling, came from West Point or old Northern families, with wives and social connections. Stark had none of that. In Boston’s crowded tenements, he’d been invisible—a scrawny youth ignored by shopgirls and debutantes who favored men with wealth or charm. He’d spent evenings in dim libraries, reading engineering tracts and writing bitter verses about a world that rejected him. A scar on his jaw, from a childhood brawl, marked him as flawed in his own mind. The war had given him purpose, a chance to command men and machines, but it hadn’t erased the resentment burning in his chest—against the CSA, against society, against the women who’d never seen him.
“General Stark, sir,” said Dowling, stepping into the tent, his round face flushed. “General Custer wants you at the ridge. Barrels are ready, but he’s impatient. Says we hit the Rebs at dawn.”
Stark’s lip curled. “Custer’s always impatient. Thinks he can ride over the Rebs like it’s ’81 again.” His Boston accent was sharp, cutting through the tent’s stuffy air. He’d clashed with Custer before—the old man’s theatrics grated on him—but Stark’s skill with barrels had earned his place. Custer’s First Armored Regiment, thirty Mark I barrels, was Stark’s domain, and he’d drilled the crews to precision.
Dowling hesitated. “He’s got a point, sir. Rebs are dug in deep—machine guns, 3-inch guns. If the barrels don’t break through, we’re stuck.”
“Then they’ll break through,” Stark snapped, tapping the map. “My crews know their work. Tell Custer I’ll be there.”
Alone, Stark stared at the map, his mind drifting. In Boston, he’d watched girls like Clara, a tailor’s daughter, laugh with officers at church socials, their eyes sliding past him. They’d see me now, he thought, but it’s too late. Rank hadn’t filled the void; it only sharpened his anger. He pulled a notebook from his pocket and scrawled: Steel and fire bow to me, but the world’s heart remains cold.
At dawn, Stark stood on a ridge overlooking the battlefield, his field glasses trained on the Confederate lines. Custer, resplendent in a tailored uniform, his white hair gleaming under a wide-brimmed hat, paced nearby, barking orders. “Stark, your barrels better smash those Rebs to kingdom come!” Custer growled. “I want Richmond by Christmas!”
“They’ll do their job, General,” Stark said, his voice flat. He didn’t care for Custer’s bluster, but the old man’s obsession with barrels matched his own. Stark had spent months tweaking the Mark I’s treads, training crews to fire on the move. If anyone could crack the Reb lines, it was him.
The barrels rolled out at 0600, their engines roaring like angry beasts. Stark watched from the ridge, his heart pounding as the Mark Is churned through mud and wire. Below, Confederate trenches bristled with machine guns, and their French-built barrels—sleeker, faster—lurked behind earthworks. Stark’s radio crackled with reports from his commanders: Lieutenant Irving Morrell, a sharp young officer, led the left flank; Captain Sam Carsten, a former sailor, held the right.
“Reb guns, 300 yards!” Morrell’s voice buzzed. “Taking fire!”
“Hold steady,” Stark ordered into the radio. “Target their emplacements. Keep moving!” He’d trained his men to ignore the chaos, to drive through shellfire. But as a Confederate 3-inch gun boomed, a Mark I erupted in flames, its crew spilling out, screaming. Stark’s jaw tightened. Losses don’t matter, he told himself. Only victory does.
The battle raged for hours. Stark’s barrels punched through the first Rebel line, their 6-pounders blasting machine-gun nests to splinters. But the Confederates countered, their barrels rolling forward, turrets spitting shells. A Mark I took a direct hit, its treads blown off, and Stark cursed under his breath. Custer, beside him, slammed a fist on a crate. “Damn the Rebs! Push harder, Stark!”
“They’re pushing,” Stark said, his tone cold. “Unless you want to drive one yourself, General, let me work.” Custer glared but said nothing. Stark’s reputation—ruthless, unyielding—kept even the old lion at bay.
By noon, the offensive stalled. The barrels had gained a mile, but Confederate anti-barrel guns and mud slowed the advance. Stark descended to the forward command post, barking orders to reposition the remaining Mark Is. Morrell approached, his face streaked with soot. “Sir, we’ve got a gap on the left. If we swing two barrels wide, we can flank their guns.”
Stark nodded. “Do it. No mistakes, Morrell.” He envied the younger man’s ease, his confidence—qualities Stark had never had. He’ll have a wife waiting, Stark thought bitterly. I’ll have nothing.
As dusk fell, the attack faltered. Stark’s barrels held the ground gained, but Richmond remained out of reach. Custer stormed into the command post, his face red. “A mile? A mile, Stark? I expected more!”
“You’ll get more tomorrow,” Stark said, his voice like iron. “Barrels need repairs. Crews need rest. Unless you want them breaking down like in Kentucky.”
Custer huffed but backed off. Alone, Stark sat by a flickering lamp, his notebook open. He wrote: I command steel, but not fate. The world sees me, yet I’m alone. He thought of Boston, of Clara’s laughter, of a life that had never wanted him. The war had given him power, but not purpose.
Morrell lingered nearby, cleaning his revolver. “Good work today, sir,” he said. “Those barrels—they’re the future. You’re making it happen.”
Stark snorted. “Future don’t care about me, Morrell. Or you. Keep your eyes on the Rebs, not my back.”
Morrell frowned but nodded. As the camp quieted, Stark stared at the map, the lines blurring. He’d fight on, for Custer, for the USA, for himself. But deep down, he knew: no victory would make the world see him.