are there any musiccels here can someone critique my music

[bruhwtf]

I'm trying to take this shit seriously I asked for critique online and all they say is just "Good " nigga I'm fking deadass

stage 1:


boss:

 

[PolskiKartofel]

Sounds similar to TERraria soundtracks

 

[Friezacel]

Sounds similar to TERraria soundtracks

also sounds like the soundtrack of old Pokemon games

 

[starystulejarz]

Sounds generic. Boss music should be more impactful, louder and faster. It's like boss music is a stage music, and stage 1 is a boss music.

This song wants me to play the game and kick ass, while yours not much


View: https://youtu.be/mGWgyKDw3iQ

 

[slavcel11]

idk boss music lacks climax and/or variety even as something that's supposed to loop indefinitely

 

[luciolencerr]

i think video game music is designed around the video game, so its hard to give critique for music thats designed a video game that doesnt exist

in other words

Sounds generic.

 

[BlackPillRiceBall]

I thought it was interesting how the stage 1 music has a quiet drum pattern so it makes the tune feel like being suspended in the air the whole time. I also like the melody at the end of the stage 1 music and the sound itself. In the boss music, I like how you take out the main bass line that you have been playing from the beginning during the melody part.

Maybe you could try a different structure if you are going to keep making music for other stages. The stage 1 music and boss music follow a "build-up with intro sequence and then melody" structure so it might be more interesting.

Also, 0:28-0:48 of your stage 1 music and 0:29-0:33 + 0:40-0:43 of your boss music uses the same rhythm so maybe you could change it up a bit too. It reminds me of the famous battle theme from Evangelion. It's a great driving rhythm that pushes things forward, but I feel like it is used in a lot of tunes.


View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E5JeO-wS2qI


I also want to hear more of the boss music since it feels like there is going to be more afterwards.

 

[Nigger Burger]

boss music should be 2+ mins long unless it's a quick boss

also sounds like the soundtrack of old Pokemon games

 

[Wizardmaxxer]

Sounds similar to TERraria soundtrack

Castlevania and pokemon og gameboy

 

[Emba]

My condolences bro..

Unless it's for a scroller game

 

[bruhwtf]

My condolences bro..

Unless it's for a scroller game

wdym this is for a shmup

 

[Dr. Autismo]

10/10

what software did you use to make these?

 

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[HONKLERedux]

Sounds generic.

 

[Nigger Burger]

My condolences bro..

Unless it's for a scroller game

that's mean

 

[Emba]

wdym this is for a shmup

Shmups me

 

[Emba]

that's mean

I'm a man of means

 

[WeirdPanda]

idk about stage 1 but for the boss music i feel like it would have been better if you kept the part when it good, repeated it and made some form of elevation of the intensity (maybe with more timbres)

The part where it got good is 0:33 btw

 

[Deathspell666]

I'm trying to take this shit seriously I asked for critique online and all they say is just "Good " nigga I'm fking deadass

stage 1:


boss:

Can't tell you an honest opinion without knowing the context for this bgm.

 

[bruhwtf]

Can't tell you an honest opinion without knowing the context for this bgm.

it's supposed to depict the red is violent theme and as for gameplay-wise the player will deal hopefully complicated and aggressive bullet hell patterns.

 

[bruhwtf]

I updated

stage 1:


boss:

 

[bruhwtf]

 

[bruhwtf]

wtf did i cook chat?

 

[yariman]

I updated

stage 1:


boss:

stage 1 is pretty good but i feel like the boss battle should have a more different and kinda epic melodic pattern
and or be more fast tempo

 

[bruhwtf]

stage 2: