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Serious Subtle Blackpills to include in a novel

Swimcell

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I’ve had a couple short stories published before and always made sure to include some hidden blackpills somewhere in them. I’ve done most of the obvious ones (dark triad, dogpill, etc) in one way or another.

Now that I’m working on my first full length novel, I wanted to take suggestions on some potent blackpills to include.

For context it’s a psychological horror / whodunnit that takes place in a priory (so female nuns and male monks)
 
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I believe the heightpill should be the primary focus, being as a majority of people on this forum are short and suffer from heightism pewpew.
 
looks > personality the most basic of blackpills
 
Wow, I haven't read them, have you posted them here? sounds interesting, I don't see many writers here.
 
Wow, I haven't read them, have you posted them here? sounds interesting, I don't see many writers here.
I would, but the blackpills really aren’t the primary focus. They’re just regular short stories for the most part. That and I’m scared of being outed by my pen name and being canceled :whatfeels:
 
Any variation of meekspill, or what it represents. (Ex. Chad rapist, killer, molester etc.)
 
Make the protagonist a 5'2 balding curry janitor
 
Nice work my lad :feelsYall:

But how did you include that?
I did a whole short story around a dark triad-ish antagonist. (This is a gross abstraction of the plot so I’m not doxxed) Guy1 beats another guy (guy2) who was hitting on his girlfriend at a bar. Turns out guy2, who is a Meeks-like character, “threw” the fight so guy1 would get arrested and get with his girlfriend while he was away.

The funnier ones like the dogpill were more references / comedic relief than fully fledged blackpills.


Make the protagonist a 5'2 balding curry janitor
:feelskek: he actually is. Except it takes place way in the past in Europe so he’s Sicilian/Southern Italian instead of curry.
 
:feelskek: he actually is. Except it takes place way in the past in Europe so he’s Sicilian/Southern Italian instead of curry.
Well Sicilian is basically almost curry
 
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Put in the lesbianpill. Everyone will enjoy reading it and you will also be able to spread the blackpill.
 
Put in the lesbianpill. Everyone will enjoy reading it and you will also be able to spread the blackpill.
What are the specifics of it? That women would rather fuck each other than low tier men?
 
I would, but the blackpills really aren’t the primary focus. They’re just regular short stories for the most part. That and I’m scared of being outed by my pen name and being canceled :whatfeels:
Oh, these are short stories, public in a magazine?
 
Oh, these are short stories, public in a magazine?
Most are published in various short story collections/anthologies. I’ve written a couple pieces for my university as well, those are mostly essays (they compile them in a little book for first year composition students to learn what non-fiction essays look like).

My main goal to eventually get on Games Workshop’s BlackLibrary team and write warhammer shit for a living :feelsmage:
 
I don't know if you need to add a specific black pill. You could make a character hybristophilic, but that's not strictly a black pill.
 
I don't know if you need to add a specific black pill. You could make a character hybristophilic, but that's not strictly a black pill.
Damn this would be interesting. I’ll jot this down.
 

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