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Dr. Autismo

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i don't want to do anything with this story anymore, so as far as i'm concerned, its public domain.
so you can plagiarize the absolute fuck out it.

i came up with this story back in like 2021, i used to care about it, but overtime, i stopped.
the story and setting was this.

it took place in a city in england in an unspecified future.
this city is full of towering skyscapers of glass and concrete that blot out the sun, and cast deep dark shadows on the people blow.
from afar, the city gleams like a diamond in the night sky, but up close and personal, its a hellhole where the worse of humanity come out to play.
fucked up freaks, violent maniacs, hungry, necrophiliac cannibals, dangerous serial killers and men who could now be considered monsters, lurk and linger on the streets at night.
this city does things to people, does... things to their heads, their minds, their souls.
if your not mental when you enter, you will be pretty soon.

sure, you can get a house, a good job and make a good living, but in the end, the darkness of this city and its mad inhabitants are always out and about.
stalking, lingering, thriving, surviving, eating, killing.
sometimes new victims, sometimes each other.... sometimes even themselves.

the MC of this story was a washed up, asshole bassist for a shitty rock band that was going nowhere.
he got kicked out of his band after getting fucked up by the drummer for fucking his mum.
he lives with his GF who has an actual job as a waitress and mostly providing for them both.
feeling useless, emasculated, and inferior, our MC desperately trys to look for work.
he comes across a job offer for an "actor" for an underground movie.
despite the lack of specifics and acting not being his thing, our MC accepts the job.

he then gets drugged and wakes up in a dark, abandoned region of town, he learns his movements are tracked by cameras.
he is instructed to kill some nearby people, which he does out of self defence.
our MC learns that hes taking part in a killing game and this is being livestreamed by the organizers so they can sell the footage as snuff films.
whats more, people watching this are betting money on him to come out on top, which he earns from his killings.
if our MC refuses to partake in the killing game, the organizers would report false accusations they created about him to the police.
and with a powerful court judge and members of the jury heavily bribed by them, our MC would spend the rest of his life in a harsh, brutal prison.

with no other choice, the MC must venture into the citys dark, decerped underbelly to fight other violent, unhinged players in the game.
not only to survive, but also earn enough money to sustain himself and his GF, but also buy his way out the killing game.
his GF also has this subplot where she tries to look for him because hes gone missing too.

so, yeah, thats the story.
i gave it the name: KILLING SPREE!, after the name of the game.
And yes, it pretty much rips off manhunt.
i don't give a fuck about this story anymore, i'm not going to do anything with it.
 
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thoughts?

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Mogger chad for sure.

The city description sounds like LA tbh or jew york :feelskek:

Not a bad premise, although it does sound familiar.
 
The city description sounds like LA tbh or jew york :feelskek:
it pretty much follows the trope of a dark, crime ridden corrupt city you see in a lot of dystopian sci fi media
Not a bad premise, although it does sound familiar.
i've "borrowed" some elements from manhunt, condemned criminal origins and arkham asylum: serious house on serious earth.
its not plagiarism, its inspiration!
 
it pretty much follows the trope of a dark, crime ridden corrupt city you see in a lot of dystopian sci fi media

i've "borrowed" some elements from manhunt, condemned criminal origins and arkham asylum: serious house on serious earth.
its not plagiarism, its inspiration!
Keep working on it brocel :panties:

It's got potential :feelscomfy:
 
i stopped giving a shit for it tbh.
i don't care if someone here steals it.
Are there any other stories you've working on? Writing could be a good cope for you brocel.
 
Write a story about an ugly incel who becomes chad and decides to take over the world to destroy all the normies, foids and other chads.
 
i don't want to do anything with this story anymore, so as far as i'm concerned, its public domain.
so you can plagiarize the absolute fuck out it.

i came up with this story back in like 2021, i used to care about it, but overtime, i stopped.
the story and setting was this.

it took place in a city in england in an unspecified future.
this city is full of towering skyscapers of glass and concrete that blot out the sun, and cast deep dark shadows on the people blow.
from afar, the city gleams like a diamond in the night sky, but up close and personal, its a hellhole where the worse of humanity come out to play.
fucked up freaks, violent maniacs, hungry, necrophiliac cannibals, dangerous serial killers and men who could now be considered monsters, lurk and linger on the streets at night.
this city does things to people, does... things to their heads, their minds, their souls.
if your not mental when you enter, you will be pretty soon.

sure, you can get a house, a good job and make a good living, but in the end, the darkness of this city and its mad inhabitants are always out and about.
stalking, lingering, thriving, surviving, eating, killing.
sometimes new victims, sometimes each other.... sometimes even themselves.

the MC of this story was a washed up, asshole bassist for a shitty rock band that was going nowhere.
he got kicked out of his band after getting fucked up by the drummer for fucking his mum.
he lives with his GF who has an actual job as a waitress and mostly providing for them both.
feeling useless, emasculated, and inferior, our MC desperately trys to look for work.
he comes across a job offer for an "actor" for an underground movie.
despite the lack of specifics and acting not being his thing, our MC accepts the job.

he then gets drugged and wakes up in a dark, abandoned region of town, he learns his movements are tracked by cameras.
he is instructed to kill some nearby people, which he does out of self defence.
our MC learns that hes taking part in a killing game and this is being livestreamed by the organizers so they can sell the footage as snuff films.
whats more, people watching this are betting money on him to come out on top, which he earns from his killings.
if our MC refuses to partake in the killing game, the organizers would report false accusations they created about him to the police.
and with a powerful court judge and members of the jury heavily bribed by them, our MC would spend the rest of his life in a harsh, brutal prison.

with no other choice, the MC must venture into the citys dark, decerped underbelly to fight other violent, unhinged players in the game.
not only to survive, but also earn enough money to sustain himself and his GF, but also buy his way out the killing game.
his GF also has this subplot where she tries to look for him because hes gone missing too.

so, yeah, thats the story.
i gave it the name: KILLING SPREE!, after the name of the game.
And yes, it pretty much rips off manhunt.
i don't give a fuck about this story anymore, i'm not going to do anything with it.
This story kind of reminds me of a serbian film, instead of a rockstar he's a ex pornstar.

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Are there any other stories you've working on? Writing could be a good cope for you brocel.
yeah, but i never really do anything with them because i feel unmotivated to do so.
that and i got more important irl stuff to focus on like trying to get my benefits back and attending meeting with my probation officers and therapists.
 
A serbian film:
An aging porn star agrees to participate in an "art film" in order to make a clean break from the business, only to discover that he has been drafted into making a pedophilia and necrophilia themed snuff film.
In Serbia, the retired porn star Milos is married with his beloved wife Marija and they have a little son, Peter, that is their pride and joy. The family is facing financial difficulties, but out of the blue, Milos is contacted by the porn actress Lejla who offers him a job opportunity in an art film. Milos is introduced to the director Vukmir who offers a millionaire contract to Milos to act in a film. However, Vukmir neither show the screenplay nor tells the story to Milos. Milos discusses the proposal with Marija and he signs the contract. But soon he finds that Vukmir and his crew are involved in sick snuff films of pedophilia, necrophilia and torture and there is no way back for him and maybe it is too late to protect his family.
 
Write a story about an ugly incel who becomes chad and decides to take over the world to destroy all the normies, foids and other chads.
there an anime with that premise, its called redo of healer.
go check it out, the MC rapes a princess in the second episode, erases her memory and keeps her as his fucktoy.
 
yeah, but i never really do anything with them because i feel unmotivated to do so.
that and i got more important irl stuff to focus on like trying to get my benefits back and attending meeting with my probation officers and therapists.
If you make more tag me in a post brocel :feelsgah::feelsYall:

I'd love to read them
 
there an anime with that premise, its called redo of healer.
go check it out, the MC rapes a princess in the second episode, erases her memory and keeps her as his fucktoy.
Based anime, practically hentai with plot ngl. Still good tbh
 
Kind of like Manhunt, i quite like it
 
If you make more tag me in a post brocel :feelsgah::feelsYall:

I'd love to read them
another abandoned story i had took place in a futuristic version of england again, but this time the MCs were a squad of armoured police officers who were investigating a series of disasters plaguing the city.
one of them was a virus that turned people into violent, unstable, raving psychopaths.
the MC was infected with the virus and was trying to discover where the virus came from before he's fully consumed by it.
i came up with this before the covid 19 outbreak btw.
 
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another abandoned story i had took place in a futuristic version of england again, but this time the MCs were a squad of armoured police officers who were investigating a series of disasters plaguing the city.
one of them was a virus that turned people into violent, unstable, raving psychopaths.
the MC was infected with the virus and was trying to discover where the virus came from before he's fully consumed by it.
i came up with this before the covid 19 outbreak btw.
Maybe It could take place within the same universe? You could cross the two together?
 
I will read this tomorrow.
 
what are your thoughts on this story?

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Cool story tbh, interesting theme. But the MC mogs me for having a gf who cares about him
 
feel free to steal my story, i don't care for it anymore.
it pretty much rips off ideas from manhunt, condemned criminal origins and arkham asylum.
I don't write so I won't steal it kek
 
A bit generic
i have some other ideas for it that would probably make it more interesting.
i think i would like to keep those ideas to myself so i could use them in a story i actually care about.
 
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