poem 'The Pit'

[jackwolfskin999]

I have fallen deeper, and deeper, and deeper,
And now there doesn't seem to be any way out

I lay among broken bones and tortured souls
And any light(even a glimmer) has been lost,

I touch these walls, they feel of human sweat,
I can not climb them,
I move my feet, across the dunk infested ground
It revolts me

And in this darkness of sorrow, misery and loneliness
I cry out
"WHY WHY WHY"
What am I suppose to do?

 

[Deleted member 18515]

I dont know bro, the i am howling at the moon poem was better tbh

 

[needsolution]

poems me so hard

 

[jackwolfskin999]

I dont know bro, the i am howling at the moon poem was better tbh

ldar poen is my best I think https://incels.is/threads/let-me-in-darkness-be.130824/

 

[Deleted member 18515]

ldar poen is my best I think https://incels.is/threads/let-me-in-darkness-be.130824/

U are good at writing poems tbh

 

[Dionysus]

go er is what your supposed to do

 

[mcfroggy]

ldar poen is my best I think https://incels.is/threads/let-me-in-darkness-be.130824/

That was really good tbh. If you posed as a Stacey online you could end up publishing.

 

[jackwolfskin999]

That was really good tbh. If you posed as a Stacey online you could end up publishing.

thanks man, but I think you have to a be a famous celeb to sell poetry in 2019

 

[Deleted member 17606]

thanks

 

[mcfroggy]

thanks man, but I think you have to a be a famous celeb to sell poetry in 2019

Not rlly, craft a shocking and weird persona (think pink guy) and give it a try. Ppl love cringe.

 

[Deleted member 19457]

Pretty good, but make them rhyme next time

 

[Deleted member 8206]

@Blacktarpill u should write poem about trucks

 

[Nothingness]

Feels like i took a look in a mirror.