"Broken down, not broken" A poem I wrote.

[Deleted member 27249]

A man with no love? It can't be so.

He has to be broken, his personality must blow,

And it really is a sad tale of sorrow and woe.

The heart is lonely, sad and bare,

Say what you will, but it's also filled with care.

What once was the home for kindness and compassion,

Was beaten down into a wasteland that's crashin'.

With thoughts of sadness in my broken head,

There's nothing I idolize more than being dead.



Call it gay if you want but I enjoy expressing myself in short poems like this when things get bad.

 

[WØLF]

It never began for EdgarAllanPoecels

 

[ihaveno1]

very creative boyo

 

[LooksAreLife]

It never began for EdgarAllanPoecels

 

[PoodankMcGee]

Nice boyo, I dig it. Same sentiment as my sig tbh

 

[Cowcel]

Mogs at being able to write poems and expressing yourself

 

[Deleted member 27249]

very creative boyo

Nice boyo, I dig it. Same sentiment as my sig tbh

Thanks boyos. I love your sig dude should be a quote tbh.

Mogs at being able to write poems and expressing yourself

Your moos say more than a thousand words ever could.

 

[Cowcel]

Your moos say more than a thousand words ever could.

Thanks bro

 

[Deleted member 27249]

IT won't touch this

 

[Deleted member 27249]

nice poem.

thanks boyo

 

[nystagmuscel]

Nice poem. It’s a cool outlet

 

[Deleted member 27249]

Nice poem. It’s a cool outlet

tanks

 

[Emba]

It never began for EdgarAllanPoecels

Never more.

 

[Deleted member 25525]

A man with no love? It can't be so.

He has to be broken, his personality must blow,

And it really is a sad tale of sorrow and woe.

The heart is lonely, sad and bare,

Say what you will, but it's also filled with care.

What once was the home for kindness and compassion,

Was beaten down into a wasteland that's crashin'.

With thoughts of sadness in my broken head,

There's nothing I idolize more than being dead.



Call it gay if you want but I enjoy expressing myself in short poems like this when things get bad.

relatable bro

>tfw not a poetcel

 

[happiless]

View: https://vocaroo.com/bD9d5bShKWk


Just needs some background music now. Should I add black metal or jpopcore?

 

[Deleted member 27249]

View: https://vocaroo.com/bD9d5bShKWk


Just needs some background music now. Should I add black metal or jpopcore?

This is unironically is soo good

 

[nystagmuscel]

tanks

Welcome

 

[truthpill]

Brutal, all foids want tall nordic chad

 

[mhhcookies]

Bro you are really good at writing poems keep it up.

 

[RREEEEEEEEE]

I enjoyed it bro.

 

[Deleted member 27249]

Bro you are really good at writing poems keep it up.

I enjoyed it bro.

thank you brothers

 

[RREEEEEEEEE]

thank you brothers

 

[Neggr]

its pretty good