A page from my Criminal memoir concerning hatred of authority and brotherhood! Based as FUCK!

[Lordgoro1]

 

[chudcel]

dnr

 

[Lordgoro1]

Too low IQ, or ADHD? Understood. But its blackpilled and based as hell!

 

[chudjak]

You need to rewrite this later after re reading it in your head to pick more fitting phrase choices. Once upon a time? It sounds like a fairy tale story more then a memoir. Maybe go slightly less cliche, like: "It was second grade, I was stuffed into that faggot brainwashing facility known as the american "school" system when i found him. Joseph, or Joey as everyone else called him, was my brother in revolt." Anything to make it not sound like it was made for a movie

 

[Lordgoro1]

T

You need to rewrite this later after re reading it in your head to pick more fitting phrase choices. Once upon a time? It sounds like a fairy tale story more then a memoir. Maybe go slightly less cliche, like: "It was second grade, I was stuffed into that faggot brainwashing facility known as the american "school" system when i found him. Joseph, or Joey as everyone else called him, was my brother in revolt." Anything to make it not sound like it was made for a movie

I write for general human audiences, and its purposely raw, because its all true and authentic. My life stories are written in language not meant to offend anyone. Kinda the point. Many enjoy it, some don't. Both of us were VERY blackpilled and based even as children.

 

[chudjak]

T

I write for general human audiences, and its purposely raw, because its all true and authentic. My life stories are written in language not meant to offend anyone. Kinda the point. Many enjoy it, some don't. Both of us were VERY blackpilled and based even as children.

Who exactly are you having read these? Like what's it for

 

[Lordgoro1]

Who exactly are you having read these? Like what's it for

My autobiography and my memoirs are meant for all of humanity, I have no "target" audience... But the events of my life are highly blackpilled and based by nature, so I share them with every outcast community as well, because they are appropriate for such!

My Dead Piggy: A Tormented Boy - Free Story by Professorjpj

A true short story of a Young boy tormented by bullies in 1976.. 100 percent Authentic

www.inkitt.com

 

[chudjak]

My autobiography and my memoirs are meant for all of humanity, I have no "target" audience... But the events of my life are highly blackpilled and based by nature, so I share them with every outcast community as well, because they are appropriate for such!

My Dead Piggy: A Tormented Boy - Free Story by Professorjpj

A true short story of a Young boy tormented by bullies in 1976.. 100 percent Authentic

www.inkitt.com

1976? Are you actually that old? I'm confused

 

[Lordgoro1]

1976? Are you actually that old? I'm confused

read the tale, its only one page. And yep, born in 1970. Old geezer! Ah well, I'm not quite dead yet! Hehe

 

[WorthlessSlavicShit]

Nice, wish I had such close friends to cause mischief with as well.

 

[Only_Perspective]

I have to say, that read was kind of gay. You mention your friend a lot, and phrase it as if it was a Bonnie and Clyde yaoi fanfiction

 

[Emba]

Fascinating

 

[Lordgoro1]

Fascinating

the full 3 page tale, for the curious...
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1026875